For our third and final project we had to create a 3-5 minute short film. For this project we were again able to create any type of short we wanted, which we were pleased about. With the two previous shorts we strayed towards a comedy and action genre so with our third piece we wanted to produce a romance. With this idea in mind we threw together ideas, we thought we would stick with the classic 'boy meets girl' situation but we didn't want it to be a common occurrence e.g. Coffee shop. After discussing we thought of idea of a often seeing of each other on the train. We needed the short to have an interesting twist we thought it could be something to do with one of couples perhaps a condition, we thought we idea of her being deaf would be perfect because it isn't an extreme. We knew we would need professional actors to achieve a short of this quality. Therefore we put an advertisement out on The British Film Youth Academy website and within days we heard back from three actors (two girls one boy), The production manger interviewed video interviewed with these people on Skype and we had are actors. Narrative
The short starts with the male on the train reading his book when a girl who walks past him catches his eye. On the train platform he then questions himself on how to introduce himself to her when she again appears running to make the train and she drops her book and doesn't notice, he runs to pick up the book to give it to her, shouts to her but she gets on the train. He then notices her again in the market but the same things happens. Finally when he waiting for the train, she appears standing next to him and he gives her the book and he sits down. She walks over to him a thanks him but uses sign language and stuttering speech, it is at this moment he realises she is deaf that's why she couldn't hear him before. The short ends with them walking away together.
Genre
The only genre in this short is romance as is shown by the story.
Inspiration
We all knew common themes on romance films but had never put them into practise. We found a short foreign film which was similar to our idea, the short is called 'Cupidity Love Stories- Travellers'. It like our starts off on a train but the male is narrating his thoughts and he speaks to girl. Unlike ours the couple spend the short together. We wanted the stray from this as we knew what ending we wanted. What we did take from this short was the camera shots used to show the couple and how to approach the male role in his type of romance.
Mise-en-scene
Setting and props- We filmed in various locations to suit the scene and these locations were public. The main prop in use was the book, the book was vital to the story as it brings the couple together.
Costume, hair, make up etc- We wanted to keep a natural look to the couple so we told them to dress and look natural. We asked that they would bring a change of clothes as the short goes over the period of a few days.
Facial expression and body language- Because we got the actors from a professional company they knew have to portray a love couple which we were pleased with.
Lighting and colour- Because we were filming in public outdoor locations we used natural lighting but we did use the reflector to dull the light when the camera was filming.
Positioning- We positioned the characters always in centre of the camera as to keep the attention of the story.
Shot Types/ Camera Usage.
Mainly mid shots where used when filming as we wanted to keep attention towards the couple. We did use close ups to show specific elements in the short e.g. the book.
Sign, Code and Conventions
When filming we stuck to typical romance drama conventions such as one notices the others first and attempts to meet them and they got there separate ways but find each other again. And the concept of 'Boy meets Girl' is the one of the most common conventions.
Theory
Again we wanted to stick with the three act structure. The set up is when we see the male is attracted to the girl, the conflict is when he tries to give the book back to her and the resolution is when he gives the book to her and they walk off together.
Todorov's equilibrium theory could also be applied here. The state of equilibrium is when he sees her on the train, the disturbance is when she drops the book, the recognition is when he thinks she is ignoring him, the repair is when he gives the book and the new equilibrium is when they walk off together.
My Role
My role in the creation of this short was the assistant director/production assistant. Within this role I was viewing the footage filmed with the main director and she would ask for my input. I felt that I performed my role well as I did suggest some other shots that improved the short as a whole.





